Pharaoh I movie presentation reflection

Over the past few humanities projects, My class and I have been working on an I movie about a chosen pharaoh, We all chose partners (mine was Viet) and then chose a pharaoh to work on (Ramses II). Overall, I think Viet and I did a pretty good job. I think that we, on average, got threes or fours.(Mostly fours, I guess), but considering that Viet was away for a couple of the classes, We were a little behind. But we managed to get the presentation done in time.

But, I think we did a good job of keeping the audiences' attention. We tried to add a little bit of humor into it, but it didn't really work. The pictures we chose were pretty good, not blurry, and on the subject, like you can't put a picture of pie for a talk about Ramses II right? We also had clear recordings, although in an EPIC voice.But one thing we messed up on, was the part about MLA citations, we forgot to do it, but we did make a bibliography page at the end of our movie.

So I'm supposed to review a video of a group that's not our own, well, I want to comment on Harjot and Samuel's video. Their movie was pretty good, they had cool pictures, descriptive information, and they showed a nice use of photo-shopping at the end,( they made it so that it looked like they were in king tut's tomb)

One thing that they could improve on is that their speeches were too long, they should take short speeches, then put them together, next to one another, that way, there would't be so many awkward pauses, or small mistakes.